Wednesday, September 06, 2006

CHAPTER ONE

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5 Comments:

Blogger Rob Gregory Browne said...

Beautiful work, Anne. I love it.

11:32 AM  
Blogger anne frasier said...

thanks, rob!

2:43 PM  
Anonymous Susan Flemming said...

Nice set up to draw you into reading further.

Also very effective was the use of pictures of the book pages... makes you feel like you are actually reading the book rather than a sample page or manuscript page... if that makes sense.

7:34 AM  
Blogger anne frasier said...

thanks, susan. i wondered if the pages worked. i thought maybe they should have been pdf files, but i also had a feeling they went with the blog.

1:09 PM  
Blogger Marcail said...

Great setup and introduction of character. The tension is palpable and we want to get on with the story. Nice foreshadowing.

3:53 PM  

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